> This Last Ring-Bearer you're reading just sounds like awful fan fiction.
It is. It is awful. I'm famous for finishing a book if I start it, but I can't finish this one. It sucks that bad. Sorry I brought it up.
The first chapter introduces two new characters... doesn't fully develop them, and then never refers to them again. It does nothing to move a plot along. What the hell, amateur-writer-man? You could cleave off that first chapter and never miss it. It's pointless.
By the third chapter, it's reading like a damn police report, just naming places, times, brief events, "Then Mr. Jones turned onto Maple avenue into the path of Lisa Pristine, knocking off her front bumper. Across town Larry Burger was having a heart attack, and taken to St. Jives Hospital, where he died."
Delete. Ignore. No value. My apologies.
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