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Re: Hello Steam, you need an editor
02/02/13 11:56 PM
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> That is, a copy editor, not a software editor. At least someone to read this stuff
> and send it back from whence it came:
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> DIVO is now available on Steam and 10% off the first week.
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> This is an unusual, bright and dynamic arcade game, in which we manage the cavy in a
> cyber wheel! Our hero must for limited time to reach the finish point is at the level
> of that simultaneously avoiding collisions with enemies and collecting all sorts of
> bonuses, for the successful completion of levels!
Oh, c'mon Tfin. The read of this text most prominently; do not confuse the object! Comprehension of such is to the full extendt of the jam.
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